When two well-known authors collaborate on a book, readers sometimes have difficulty telling what each author contributed to the final work. However, I can make an educated guess in Fatal Intrusion, the serial killer thriller by Jeffery Deaver and Isabella Maldonado. Homeland Security Special Agent Carmen Sanchez seems cut from the same mold as Maldonado’s series protagonists like Nina Guerrera and Daniela Vega. Similarly, her “partner” in the investigation is Professor Jacoby Heron. He’s an expert in the self-described obscure study of “intrusions” and the type of guy Deaver’s Lincoln Rhyme would compare notes with. When they both get on the trail of a ruthless killer, Fatal Intrusion becomes an entertaining, albeit somewhat far-fetched, novel.
The killer in Fatal Intrusion has a morbid fascination with spiders (even sporting a spider tattoo on his wrist, a key piece of evidence in the case). He’s also a student of police forensics who’s quite good at covering his tracks as he embarks on a killing spree of seemingly random people in various locations around Southern California. “Spider Tatt Guy” (as he’s soon dubbed) makes only one mistake. An early intended victim is
Carmen Sanchez’s sister, who narrowly escapes death at her assailant’s hands. An angry Sanchez makes the Spider case a personal quest, and, with the clout she has as a Homeland Security agent, she’s able to work across multiple jurisdictions.
However, the killer isn’t a lone wolf (or spider, in this case). He’s got a powerful hacker helping him evade the authorities. So, Sanchez recruits her own expert, Jacoby Heron. He’s a former Robin Hood hacker, whom Sanchez busted in her last case as an FBI agent. Having served his sentence, Heron teaches a graduate class on intrusions, which he defines as: “someone or something deliberately entering into a place or situation where they’re unwelcome or uninvited.” He also moonlights as a penetration testing expert, someone hired by major companies to test their security devices. He becomes Sanchez’s consultant on what is, in essence, her two-person task force.
Sanchez and Heron have a prickly, combative chemistry that works very well in Fatal Intrusion. The book takes place over only four days, so both the cops and the killer move rapidly (at times implausibly rapidly) over a sizable amount of California real estate. Heron uses the internet and his computer skills to get ahead in the investigation, often to Sanchez’s consternation. However, she’s no Inspector Lestrade left befuddled by Sherlock Holmes’s skills. Instead, she’s a pretty shrewd investigator on her own and a deadly force when the inevitable showdowns occur. The Spider is a worthy foe, resourceful and daring. (In one chapter, he literally walks past Sanchez and Heron on a stakeout of a suspect’s location, posing as a neighbor walking his dog.) The authors shift the point-of-view between protagonists and villains from chapter to chapter so readers will be ahead of the characters in seeing how successful the various efforts are.
Anyone who has ever read a Jeffery Deaver novel knows to expect plot twists, and Fatal Intrusion has its share. That’s one reason I haven’t described the plot in more detail, although I will note that the storyline is far more complex than it first appears. The book has fewer twists and surprises than the Lincoln Rhyme novels I’ve read, but most readers will probably hit themselves on the side of the head for not spotting some of them. I would advise readers to keep the principle of Chekov’s gun in mind when reading Fatal Intrusion. The book has no throwaway details or characters.
This plot complexity is one of the book’s strengths but also its major weakness. I’ve never enjoyed cop shows and movies in which the investigators have an omniscient computer whiz at their disposal. This genius can, within seconds, figure out any missing piece of evidence that would have required days of legwork for investigators in the past. Heron serves that function here. His deductive leaps are needed to allow the authors to wrap up the book in four days. But they sometimes feel overly convenient. Similarly, the Spider’s hacker can take over traffic signal networks and erase surveillance footage as needed to allow the Spider to evade capture.
Fortunately, Heron is more than the stereotypical nerd. He’s the most complex character in the book, and his efforts to stay at the forefront of the investigation despite his “consultant” status provide an entertaining storyline. He and Sanchez form the best type of team, one in which each member contributes their own highly trained skills in a way that complements the other. The book ends with a major showdown and shootout that should satisfy all action fans.
The authors have another Sanchez and Heron novel planned, and this duo forms an offbeat and likable investigative team that could easily anchor a long-running series. Fatal Intrusion incorporates the best of the authors’ writing strengths in a thriller that combines high-tech computer wizardry with some good old-fashioned detective work. Genre fans will want Fatal Intrusion to intrude on their reading lists.
NOTE: The publisher graciously provided me with a copy of this book through NetGalley. However, the decision to review the book and the contents of this review are entirely my own.
In this clip, the authors discuss their novel with Carter Wilson of the Making It Up podcast:
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Jeffery Deaver is an international number-one bestselling author of over 40 novels and three short story collections. His novels have appeared on bestseller lists around the world. His books are sold in 150 countries and translated into over 25 languages. He has served two terms as president of Mystery Writers of America, and was recently named a Grand Master of the MWA. Deaver also been nominated for eight Edgar Awards by the MWA. His The Bodies Left Behind was named Novel of the Year by the International Thriller Writers Association, and his Lincoln Rhyme thriller, The Broken Window, and a stand-alone novel, Edge, were also nominated for that prize. The Garden of Beasts won the Steel Dagger from the Crime Writers Association in England.
Isabella Maldonado is a former law enforcement officer turned Wall Street Journal bestselling author. She was a graduate of the FBI National Academy in Quantico and the first Latina to attain the rank of captain in the Fairfax County Police Department just outside Washington, DC, before retiring as the Commander of Special Investigations and Forensics. During more than two decades on the force, her assignments included hostage negotiator, department spokesperson, and precinct commander. Maldonado’s books include the bestselling FBI Special Agent Nina Guerrera series, the award-winning Detective Veranda Cruz series, and the Agent Daniela "Dani" Vega series. Her books are published in 24 languages.
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